Q1.
Explanation/Analysis/Argument
15/20
Examples
15/20
Terminology
7/10
Total - 37/50
Targets:
Revise editing
Give a larger range of examples to reach level 4
Make analysis more nuanced to reach level 4
10/10 on terminology, improve range
Q2.
Explanation/Analysis/Argument
17/20
Examples
13/20
Terminology
5/10
Total - 35/50
Targets:
Boost terminology to 10/10
Give a greater range of relevant examples to reach level 4
Consider both sides of the argument in the answer
Overall Total - 72/100
